That was pretty funny. I liked the A+ a lot too. Nice touch.
Doesn't need to be longer than this :)
you need to make it a little longer :)
I would also advice to actually make something happen. maybe the spider would eat the lion, maybe the lion would eat the spider?
I would say it is a nice start.
thanks for the review
I thought it was gonna be really corny after the glass broke.
But then it wasn't!
Always awesomeness from Sexual-Lobsterman.
Nice, but why no colour?
The sounds were a little bit off but the animated parts were really nice to look at. But I wonder why you did not use any colours? It would have made this movie 3 x as good. Some colours and shades work miracles... Even if you think it is too much work I am sure you could ask a friend to help you out to contribute to your awesome flashes.
Bit of a bad first impression
I thought this was going to be a bad submission until the fighting scene started. It was really entertaining to watch.
The music was okay, sound effects were lacking and as someone else mentioned adding voices would have made this movie not only more "animated" but also easier to follow. You might want to think about using shadows next time. The drawings are already pretty good but if you would use some decent shades the quality will skyrocket. Plus the transition (except for the beginning) between scenes happened a bit too fast for my feeling.
Underrated and therefor I'm going to give you a 5 but my real rating:
Thanks alot for the review, I had started on the second one so I definetly rushed this one to get it done. Next one will have much higher quality.
Very smooth stick fight. "Realistic" fluent movements. Lots of guys coming in the screen, must have taken a serious amount of time to get those few seconds done.
Very impressive. Maybe some (quality) soundeffects could improve it even more?
Great graphics, great sound, unique story with a funny surprise. Sure, some might find this offensive. But I don't think you should put a limit on what you should animate about.
The graphics were drawn pretty smoothly and the voiceacting soundquality was also there. The joke dragged on for too long though. It went from funny, to okay, to dragging on, to really boring.
But you made your point. Summed up pretty much what all animes are all about.
Nice sound effects. Pretty fun to see. Not to ugly. Now we just need some backgrounds and a story :)
From super corney to super evil :)
That was a fun little animation with a catchy song. It looked like just a random boring cartoon but things changed as it progressed.
What I don't get is why he calls the other ferret a whore in the end...
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