A fair review...
I missed sound... I know that you added 2 or 3 things but that is far from enough! You should have added a sound on every motion (or almost every).
The story was funny as hell btw! laughed the first time I saw it :) (and that is a rare thingy, me laughing with a movie in a positive way)
O yes, since I KNOW that you did it with frame-by-frame-moving I'll give you extra credit for that too!
2.37 = too low, -serge votes 5- 2.40/5.00 that is a little more like it :)